Dying Young

by Innocent Fairy   Sep 21, 2011


Friendship
in the years I have;
they all seem to
come and go.

Desolation
is all I got;
it tuned into my
heart and soul.

Wandering
on this only path;
I have destinations
without goal.

Conflicting
with this strange mind;
now thoughts are
on their own.

Affection
is the only hope;
left for me
to grow.

or..

Departure
is all I want;
an escape
from these bones.

Poets notes: this is a wonderful sad poem collab done with my friend Birds of Paradise. & i enjoyed making it it was fun <3*** Thanxs my friend...anyways please comment and rate on his as well. Here's his link
http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=375177
Thanxs and hope you enjoy :)

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  • 12 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    Wonderful poem, expressing a variety of sad emotions in simple words. Great work you two.

  • 12 years ago

    by Liliana

    Great job 5/5 :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    I really liked it:)5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    You two work very good together :)

    I love this poem, not knowing what way to go.
    Amazing job(:
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by average thoughts

    I realy enjoyed writing with u...and thanks for d structure too..5 hearts frm me..