I found the ring I had for you
A tear rolls down from my eye
I light a match and burn the box
This is my last and final goodbye...
-My favorite stanza, filled with such intensity as you set it on fire.
This is a beautiful poem :).
It flowed perfectly, not one thing i would change. So much pain & hurt & reminiscing about the past and finally for once being able to say goodbye completely and let go all together.
Forgot to add
-this is going in my favorite poems list :)
6 years ago
Wow! This is so wonderful. The emotion is definatly here, fully and used very well. The choice of words is clear and fits the piece well. There is an obvious story present that is amazing. Your descriptions are fantastic. The length of this piece is nice. Great job with the flow. I am also putting this on my favorites list, but I wish I had some weekly votes left. Anyway I gave this a 5/5 excellent piece.