Comments : This box of you...

  • 6 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Amazing Matthew :)

    I found the ring I had for you
    A tear rolls down from my eye
    I light a match and burn the box
    This is my last and final goodbye...
    -My favorite stanza, filled with such intensity as you set it on fire.

    This is a beautiful poem :).
    It flowed perfectly, not one thing i would change. So much pain & hurt & reminiscing about the past and finally for once being able to say goodbye completely and let go all together.

    You know I'm a huge fan of your work(:
    5/5

  • 6 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Forgot to add
    -this is going in my favorite poems list :)

  • 6 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Wow! This is so wonderful. The emotion is definatly here, fully and used very well. The choice of words is clear and fits the piece well. There is an obvious story present that is amazing. Your descriptions are fantastic. The length of this piece is nice. Great job with the flow. I am also putting this on my favorites list, but I wish I had some weekly votes left. Anyway I gave this a 5/5 excellent piece.

  • 6 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    You penned sadness to the peak of perfection and yet resolve of how things are now. Your last stanza made me catch my breath the image and emotion was so clear. An amazing work of art

    Connie

  • 6 years ago

    by Owner of an Untamed Heart

    Breathtakingly painful. I loved it. 5/5

  • Wow, Cupcake.. That was... So powerful and just so... Unbelievably perfect to describe how one box can do that... It's just so... Wow... Superb job.

    5/5

    - Shining Star!!