Maybe it's just the Curtains

by Sunshine   Sep 27, 2011


How would it feel to love you,
take you out of your misery
and offer you a reason
to smile about.

I see you taking new roads
that lead you no where, exploring
big halls that you already
know are hollow and empty.

To save you from your own
madness I wonder how would
making you happy change the color
of the curtains in my bedroom
that I think is sad, yet...

Would your heartbeats pump
so fast that I would forget
my own? That I would
rejoice in the morning

or would I feel a victim that
wakes up having bad dreams
because she knows she's lying
on both of us

do you think I would start noticing
all the good things in my life that
I haven't noticed before? or

would I not, would I not at all,
fake that I love you, at all.

by: Rania Moallem

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  • 12 years ago

    by Yakari Gabriel

    Back for my 101th read okay.

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Wow great fantastic poem as always really good I love love loved it and a wonderful reah just outstanding :) :) 10/10

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    A poem of confusion, no not the writing of it, for it's amazing like all your work.
    But the character living in a state of unrest, of should I or shouldn't I. I loved the unsettling of her mind set and resolve. A great job.

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Well-done. I liked its simplicity and the way it's structured.

  • 12 years ago

    by Yakari Gabriel

    Baby!
    uhm I must say..
    in my opinion I think it will sound better if you remove the "at all"
    at the end... and leave it like this..

    would I not, would I not at all,
    fake that I love you.

    but that's just my opinion..
    anyway,
    nothing Is ever going to top "my best poem"

    But darling this was ever so lovely<3
    I loved everything about it..
    the tone was so lovely..
    I can say I relate to this piece in so many ways..
    that one person you really wanna get under their skin,that one person you want to safe and by saving them saving yourself...

    I am inlove with this little piece
    and the changing curtains in the bedroom is so so creative!
    you have an amazing mind Nana

    Well done!

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