Baby!
uhm I must say..
in my opinion I think it will sound better if you remove the "at all"
at the end... and leave it like this..

would I not, would I not at all,
fake that I love you.

but that's just my opinion..
anyway,
nothing Is ever going to top "my best poem"

But darling this was ever so lovely<3
I loved everything about it..
the tone was so lovely..
I can say I relate to this piece in so many ways..
that one person you really wanna get under their skin,that one person you want to safe and by saving them saving yourself...

I am inlove with this little piece
and the changing curtains in the bedroom is so so creative!
you have an amazing mind Nana

Well done!

Well-done. I liked its simplicity and the way it's structured.

A poem of confusion, no not the writing of it, for it's amazing like all your work.
But the character living in a state of unrest, of should I or shouldn't I. I loved the unsettling of her mind set and resolve. A great job.

Wow great fantastic poem as always really good I love love loved it and a wonderful reah just outstanding :) :) 10/10

Back for my 101th read okay.