Who knew...

by Matthew Schut   Sep 28, 2011


Oh, how you used to say I was perfect
I was the most amazing guy
I fulfilled all of your dreams
And you promised me, no goodbye

Every night you would talk to me
So you could fall asleep to my voice
Once you awoke, you would call
Most days you would call twice

Your days were all about me
Texting me to say I love you
All your friends were amazed
With all the sweet things I would do

Holding hands, you would whisper
"Baby, I'm still not close enough"
You held onto my arm so close
Whispering, "You're mine, hot stuff"

As my heart begins to tingle
I smile back and whisper, "Forever"
Who would have thought
That we would soon not be together

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  • 6 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This is awesome. I agree with the above about that specific stanza being cute, and about the flow. The story was nice and most people can relate to it. Excellent piece, amazing job

  • 6 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Aw, i know how this is.
    Loved it.

    Holding hands, you would whisper
    "Baby, I'm still not close enough"
    You held onto my arm so close
    Whispering, "You're mine, hot stuff"
    -so cute(:

    It flowed perfectly, the emotion poured out. How close yall were & never expecting it to turn out like this.
    Great Job (:
    5/5