Comments : I'm here...

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This is sweet. There is a ton of emotion, and strong emotion at that. The flow is perfect!! You start off so wonderfully and end so strong. Your voice is clear and precise. I really like this piece though it was not penned very originally, or so it seems. Other than that I give this a 5/5.

    Oh yes before I forget wonderful word choice.

  • 12 years ago

    by Meme

    Sweet, amazing, awesome, spectacular, tender, charming, heart-felt, epic piece you have in here.

    There is something in the way it makes you feel after reading it. I miss writing love poems :( but your poem may start an inspiration to me ;)

    Loved it Matt :)
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Awwww this poem is so romantic and sweet! I loved it from the beginning until the end!

    I agree with Meme, all her words describe what you've written! And I haven't written a sweet love poem like this in ages, so I miss it too!!!

    Amazingggg =D

  • 12 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Wow..so cute, simple, beautiful, excellent piece..5+5..

  • 12 years ago

    by shayla

    I love this poem :]