Flower Children [Haiku]

by Elizabeth   Sep 30, 2011


Petals outstretched they
welcome the morning sun with
open minds and hearts

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  • 5 years ago

    by yogi73

    What a great poem about kids...so accurate! well done!

  • 5 years ago

    by Lioness

    Hey Elizabeth,

    I really loved this haiku.

    I imagined a beautiful flower field with thousands of flowers coming to life in spring.

    I loved how you personified the flowers -

    welcome the morning sun with
    open minds and hearts

    LOVED IT

    x

  • 6 years ago

    by WTMNIS

    ^^I'm Noura ;D

  • 6 years ago

    by WTMNIS

    I LOVED this, Lady! :P

    Lizzy, you've done a good job on this one, I can clearly see that you have this magic way in writing haikus which of course I suck at, Lol! I could imagine how the rose petals are stretching out, welcoming the sun rays, that was truly refreshing, you rock at nature poems, sweet poetess.

    The title was really eye-catching. I liked it as well. Good work!