Autumn (Haiku)

by Dark Secrets   Sep 30, 2011


Falling leaves bluring
Against coruscating rays
Dew absorbs red hue

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  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    Nature is one of my favourite theme in poetry. Autumn has lovely set of words that creates colorful imagery. Short as usual of haiku form but yours is awe-inspiring and lingers in the mind for awhile. I love your style, full of sound images and classy words. I appreciate your magnificent talent. Jazakallah, cheers! :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    Much better :) Write on!

  • 12 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    I used a syllable counter... I guess maybe not that accurate :S << awkward. I'll edit

  • 12 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    Either i am sleeping or the syllable count is not right.. 5-7-5. An easy fix :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Mmm, intersting. Haikus can be so cozy and enchanting. I liked this one. Imaginative and carries lots of meaning.

    Go Zahra :)