My favorite poem!

So deep & so real.
The pain you feel as hes doing things to her, trying your hardest to stay strong when nothings going right. This is an amazing poem. It flows perfectly, it draws you in to read more. Everybody can relate to this. Great job girl. The emotion is overwhelming & heartfelt.
5/5

Deep very deep loved it!!!

Wow, so much emotion!! I loved it! Good work! :)

I'm sort of speechless for this said what is in a heart mistreated yet the words fail us. You found those words and penned them with perfection.

Connie

I adore this! <3

This is far more intense then simple words can comment. it's deep and running over with emotional stress. Very good job girl very good

I agree. The poem was very poetic but contained real and deep emotion. It is difficult to have a poem with so much emotion and it still be poetic. This left me with a loss for words. Good job.

This is beautiful!

Simple but awesome.i like your choice of words and the emotions flowing through are very intense.i wish i could tell that to my girlfriend.lol.very relatabe

Wow this is a heart to heart poem and really Agnes with a pang,,,a great read though sad and you can feel the emotion and pretty much visualize
I loved it and a very good job,,greatly done :) :) 5/5