Comments : Paired Harmony (Collab with gIrL)

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    I loved this it's very desirable and sweeet and true for many...a terrific read and excellent write u two did wonderful.... very nice :) :) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Well written collaborations are not only seamess, they are outstanding. This piece is just that and then some. It is simple yet interesting, and it flows.very well for coming from two different minds.

  • 12 years ago

    by Kayla Sonya Dearing

    That was really good hun. I know how that can be though. I've been there a lot lol.

  • 12 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Awwww this poem is SOOO beautiful! What a wonderful collaboration - both your styles meshed so well, and speaking of perfect harmony, this poem did have harmony! It didn't even feel like it was written by two people... Amazing job! So proud of both of you. Love itttt <3333

  • 12 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    Very touching and sweet.
    You both did an amazing job.

    5/5

    -Heather

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    An absolutely wonderful piece. It was filled with love and smooth flowing.
    Not only was it well penned but a theme some can really relate too.
    Excellent, you write as one .

  • 12 years ago

    by kimara4955

    Thats beautiful, i loved the poem and the fact that you two found each other through your passion. it's so romantic. :) 5/5 xx