Arrogate Metaphors

I'm giggling so hard... That was pretty funny, dear.

5/5

-Heather

Aww wow I loved this! I loved the imagery you created through your words... and I must say nice choice of food! yummy! But really nicely written, I enjoyed it very much. Well done =D

Nice rhyming piece..a nice little jingle

Well they have said it all so there is nothing much for me to say except for thanks for another excellent read..liked it.

Why didn't I come across this earlier?

I can only agree with all the comments above and it was a more than enjoyable read.
Your choice of words and how you managed to convey this message with unique and somehow entertaining metaphors is just stunning. I definately loved the fact that this poem flows smoothly and rhymes too! I haven't read this kind of poems in quite a while; poems with original rhymes, smooth flow, brilliant wording AND a great message.

This is absolutely brilliant, no doubt.