Comments : Nobodys Watching.

  • 6 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    This is brilliant..the emotions in this poem are so real and heartfelt

  • 6 years ago

    by Nick who Plays Pool

    Very well written! You paid close attention to your words and the flow is good :)

  • 6 years ago

    by LivHelen Kernan

    I have to say...honestly...I love the emotion in this poem...it actually took me back personally

  • 6 years ago

    by ana

    I love the emotion in this poem. its great and don't worry, you are not alone and you can always message me if you need anything
    Love,
    Ana
    5/5

  • 6 years ago

    by Tori

    This is my favorite your really good hun you have a lot.of passion in your poems.

  • 6 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    Ah that's sad and everyone has those feelings even i do cause im not as talented as mom was or as nice but im still me! :)

  • 6 years ago

    by BlueJay

    You have penned an amazing piece. Excellent job. This is so simple, yet it manages to be extraordinary. 5/5

  • 6 years ago

    by xx stacy xx

    Love it

  • 6 years ago

    by Isabelle

    I used to do crosscountry running. and i used to think the best thing about it is nobody was watching me. i think i perform best that way. when i know no one is watching me. it gives me room and space to do my best and be faithful to my god.. that helps me to perform well. i absolutely hate the feeling of being watched! nice write girl. but i think u want to be watched?

  • 6 years ago

    by Isabelle

    I used to do crosscountry running. and i used to think the best thing about it is nobody was watching me. i think i perform best that way. when i know no one is watching me. it gives me room and space to do my best and be faithful to my god.. that helps me to perform well. i absolutely hate the feeling of being watched! nice write girl. but i think u want to be watched?

  • 6 years ago

    by Isabelle

    I used to do crosscountry running. and i used to think the best thing about it is nobody was watching me. i think i perform best that way. when i know no one is watching me. it gives me room and space to do my best and be faithful to my god.. that helps me to perform well. i absolutely hate the feeling of being watched! nice write girl. but i think u want to be watched?

  • 6 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    The title was simple and intriguing and worked well.

    I was a little puzzled by the set-up, I'd suggest removing the gaps in the lines,
    and use stanza's to improve the flow.

    I liked the hope within this, amidst the feeling of failure.
    The ending was good too.

    A nice piece overall.

  • 5 years ago

    by Ruby Red Memories

    You always penn such enjoyable poetry. I look forward to reading more poems by you.

    5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Another inspiring poem..
    Lines like
    Stres eating me alive and
    I hold on al these thoughts r refreshing..

    5/5..