This is brilliant..the emotions in this poem are so real and heartfelt

Very well written! You paid close attention to your words and the flow is good :)

I have to say...honestly...I love the emotion in this poem...it actually took me back personally

I love the emotion in this poem. its great and don't worry, you are not alone and you can always message me if you need anything
Love,
Ana
5/5

This is my favorite your really good hun you have a lot.of passion in your poems.

Ah that's sad and everyone has those feelings even i do cause im not as talented as mom was or as nice but im still me! :)

You have penned an amazing piece. Excellent job. This is so simple, yet it manages to be extraordinary. 5/5

Love it

I used to do crosscountry running. and i used to think the best thing about it is nobody was watching me. i think i perform best that way. when i know no one is watching me. it gives me room and space to do my best and be faithful to my god.. that helps me to perform well. i absolutely hate the feeling of being watched! nice write girl. but i think u want to be watched?

I used to do crosscountry running. and i used to think the best thing about it is nobody was watching me. i think i perform best that way. when i know no one is watching me. it gives me room and space to do my best and be faithful to my god.. that helps me to perform well. i absolutely hate the feeling of being watched! nice write girl. but i think u want to be watched?

I used to do crosscountry running. and i used to think the best thing about it is nobody was watching me. i think i perform best that way. when i know no one is watching me. it gives me room and space to do my best and be faithful to my god.. that helps me to perform well. i absolutely hate the feeling of being watched! nice write girl. but i think u want to be watched?

The title was simple and intriguing and worked well.

I was a little puzzled by the set-up, I'd suggest removing the gaps in the lines,
and use stanza's to improve the flow.

I liked the hope within this, amidst the feeling of failure.
The ending was good too.

A nice piece overall.

You always penn such enjoyable poetry. I look forward to reading more poems by you.

5/5

Another inspiring poem..
Lines like
Stres eating me alive and
I hold on al these thoughts r refreshing..

5/5..