Wow i love love loved this poem its alll sooo great :) wonderfuly done my friend :) and great sadness indeed but yet inspiring :):) 5/5

Love this<3

Wanting to go back in time & change what happened. & Only if you could, you would.

Amazing Poem.
Gonna nominate it :)
5/5

Life is an adventure in time, going back would never be an option for me even if I could. We learn with every step good or bad.

I love the way you word your poems, it's laced with so much emotion and meaning. Each one makes one sit back and think. It's meaningful, great flow.
Excellent my friend

Connie

Well, thank you all for you kind comments on these few simple lines that I originally penned in Jan this year to lift someone's (not a PnQ meber) spirits up (may seemlike mine, but not really) from the melancholic thoughts that I read on her blogsite. I hope it worked for that someone special. I did not ever intend to publish this one, but a recent sad winning poem recently reminded me that others in this world could also use these thoughts. We all carry the power of motivation within ourself to survive near drowning experiences, we just need how to use it, or perhaps have someone show us how to, when spirits are down.

Why haven't my club manager seen this?

She must read it.

I always want to go back in time.. I really do. I wish I could do that.

Just using the current of the river in this place makes you poem alive, and moving :)

Actuallly I did read+comment, and talk to you about it :) cant see why my comment has vanished but ?I loved rereading this and being reminded about it, thanks Abed.

Thank you L.soul for writing this as well :)
<3 God Bless

Great poem:) ofc a 5/5 again:)

Great poem:) ofc a 5/5 again:)