Cupid's love arrow

Okay... I know it isn't right... Or normal apparently... But I was laughing hard when you wrote you shot cupid... Diaper wearing arrow creeper got what he deserved... ANYWAY...

Back to the truly beautiful poem at hand... That was so sweet and sincere. Each line had this radiant flow that kept me desiring more. Then, when I got to your twist it was a huge shocker, but somehow so fitting with the ending you wrote.

5/5 like always, cupcake! ^^

- Shining Star

Wow!! Matt this poem was SOOO SWEEET and touchinggg, but sadddd! I loved all your sweet descriptions, but when Cupid was shot, it kind of made me sad! But the fact that you 'did' that because you felt like you weren't perfect enough for this person... it disappointed me a little! (not the poem - but the idea)
I don't think the idea of not being deserving of someone, is nice to think of. if that makes sense? But I know it's just a poem!!

But really great job with this! I love your poetry =)

I don't even know if you know it
But you are the one that I desire
With your simple, beautiful ways
My heart is set on fire
~ this is my favorite stanza but I absolutely love love loved this poem it was an amazing read :) :) though if this was true I would say the girl deserves the choice because deep down she may feel the same,I'd say take the risk cuz if she don't feel the same u should be able to move on as great friends,,,anyways I loved the poem it was outstanding :) :) 5/5

Totally get this poem. If this is really happening with you i know how you feel

Wow,matt..u and ur poetry jus marvelous..i mean d beauty abt ur poems is dt u tuk d simple ordinary words and make them priceless..
No sign of dat frustrating vocablry shit..
Thanks to u for writing sch beautiful poems...
Bt i hv a req ,plz ,plz ,plz make ur poems titles as strng n beautiful as ur poems..
I wish i cud gv more,bt jus 5 to gv..
Keep on writing..