Comments : Perfect family...or was it...

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Wow outstanding job again as always you have soooo much emotion felt in alll you're poems just amazing job 10/10

  • 12 years ago

    by Brittany Klein

    This poem was amazing, it was sad and made me cry at the end.... but it was a great write. Very strong worded and something from the heart!

    5/5

    Always,
    ~Brittany~

  • 12 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Wow, bought a tear to my eye. very well written. and always being so young, when a parent leaves we always blame ourselves. know this feeling very well!