Yet again you have story and emotion nailed. Though I do believe that your word choice could be a lot stronger. The flow is there, but its quite faint. although there are a few minor corks, I am still mesmerized by this piece. Fantastic job!

An amazing outstanding poem very well written I loved it and it was a sad lovely read just fantastic :) :) 5/5

An amazing outstanding poem very well written I loved it and it was a sad lovely read just fantastic :) :) 5/5