Comments : Flavor

  • 6 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    I love love love this poen:) I would never believe that a girl in ur age would write these things, but I know u so I believe Again no fav stamza, cause all the poem is amazing. Ur a perfect young writer, I wish I could have some of ur talent :P ofc a 5:)

  • 6 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    A great rhyming poem, thought provoking, though I may differ somewhat on certain lines, but very well written.

    Happy to nominate your well penned thoughts, young lady.

  • 6 years ago

    by DiAbolIcaL LiThIuM

    This is a well thought out poem i love your use of rythm

  • 6 years ago

    by Lofallenve

    I agree with it being well thought out. :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Ebony Hope

    Are you sure you are 13? Cause I am 13, and I could never write anything like this. I mean I love this piece, it is creative and speaks to me, the title is eye catching; but I honestly have never seen a 13 year old with such wisdom or talent! Anyway 5/5 excellent job.

  • 6 years ago

    by L

    Another great piece. I think no one needs to tell you how to write for you know the right way to express what you want and how you feel.

  • 6 years ago

    by Ibrahim

    You really drove the point home, yet you kept the rhyming consistent. Nice work :) 5/5

  • 6 years ago

    by Lover Boy

    This poem was AMAZING absolutly one of your best pecies of work AMAZING job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This well written poem reflects my feeling on what poetry should be

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard


    A couple of things really struck me about this piece. One, that it is a rhyming poem, which (unless I'm very much mistaken) isn't your usual 'flavour'. However, it is done very well, especially considering you were a mere thirteen at the time this went to print!
    Which leads me nicely on to what a perceptive little write this is for one so young: heartfelt and full of the kind of obvious sense that only the young possess. Somewhere along the road, adults seem to mess up even the most simple of things...
    Let people be exactly what they want to be; let them express themselves the way they should and the world would be made up of far more honesty, happiness and comfort within our own skins.

    Well done on this; your talent shone through even then.

    All the very best.

  • 1 year ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Hey Blue Jay......well I gotta say i really love this piece.

    I really like the tempo and how it flows - like water on glass and your voice in this is very direct and powerful as is the word choice.

    "Don't tell a gamer how to play,
    don't tell a ghost how to cry.
    Trust me they'll have a lot to say,
    and they won't even have to try."


    This right here GENIUS.

  • 11 months ago

    by Mahesh Kachare

    Greatest poem I ever read.

  • 7 months ago

    by Sampreeth kotian

    Nice write.... I enjoyed the flow of thoughts as well as the rhyme /rhythm.... Quite similar to my writing style :-)

  • 7 months ago

    by PineappleKing

    This is still one of my favorites, Baby.