Comments : Who will be my superhero? (Song)

  • 6 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Wow,,,amazing,,,i loved it and eveything was gread and it was a terrific read,,,very awesome, though i had no favorite part cuz altogether it was great :) :) 5/5

  • 6 years ago

    by Meme

    Got me tearing, it just hit my straight into my heart, and opened up some closed doors. It is indeed hard, so hard not being able to say goodbye, and its even harder to face the facts that surrounds you.

    The way you write is so sincere, breath-taking, and deep. Keep on writing like this, I simply love it.

  • 6 years ago

    by Meme

    I forgot, a 5/5 and straight nomination.

  • 6 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    When I read songs it is soooo hard for me to imagine them being sung without music being played and all, they are just words on the screen- but not this one, Its like I could hear it all. It was the first time it has happened to me like this, reading. Absolutely fabulous. And when I was done I thought "God that WAS good!"

  • 6 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    I love love love this(:<3

    Amazing poem. The love you feel pours out, not able to say goodbye & wondering who will be your superhero :). It flowed beautifully & kept making you want to read it.

    An amazing job, one of my favorite poems I've read :)
    5/5

  • 6 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    This must be one of the sweetest, creative, heartfelt and most amazing poems under love section!! for a good while..

    i love it, and enjoyed reading every single line of it, well done, this will be nominated by the club on Tuesday. chosen XD

    5/5

  • 6 years ago

    by Decayed

    Amazing piece Joe.
    So you write songs also? :)

    Wow- impressive.

  • 6 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This is terrific.The flow is outstanding, which is helpful if you wish to deem it worthy of being a song. Your word choice, emotion, and story are excellent and also very helpful to call a piece a song. Wow, I can't get over how well written this is. Amazing job. I also gave this a 5/5

  • 6 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    A poem with soul, emotions, and meaning. Wording was stellar, flow easy and light. You did an excellent job on this...masterpiece for sure

    Connie

  • 6 years ago

    by Fulcrous

    True art has no words to describe its level of "wow-factor."
    Just another one of those moments.

  • 6 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    This is amazing I love it:)

  • 6 years ago

    by RSJ

    This is beyond good man.
    I'd really Love to see you post more often.
    nomination and God bless.

  • 6 years ago

    by Decayed

    I FEEL LIKE I'm GONNA SING THIS!!!
    XD

  • 5 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Wonderfully written, within this oem there are so many great lines I could just pick one. Great poem

  • 5 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    If you scroll up, yes up up there you can see that I've already commented, so do not think I am disturbing but I need to try this haha....

    Edit:

    you rock my world joey, thanks for the news lol

  • Wow, it's been a long time since I've read anything that you've wrote... A very long time in fact. I can definitely see the improvement and the change of writing style in some ways. Amazing piece of writing; very heartfelt.

    5/5

    -Heather