Got me tearing, it just hit my straight into my heart, and opened up some closed doors. It is indeed hard, so hard not being able to say goodbye, and its even harder to face the facts that surrounds you.
The way you write is so sincere, breath-taking, and deep. Keep on writing like this, I simply love it.
When I read songs it is soooo hard for me to imagine them being sung without music being played and all, they are just words on the screen- but not this one, Its like I could hear it all. It was the first time it has happened to me like this, reading. Absolutely fabulous. And when I was done I thought "God that WAS good!"
This must be one of the sweetest, creative, heartfelt and most amazing poems under love section!! for a good while..
i love it, and enjoyed reading every single line of it, well done, this will be nominated by the club on Tuesday. chosen XD
6 years ago
Amazing piece Joe.
So you write songs also? :)
6 years ago
This is terrific.The flow is outstanding, which is helpful if you wish to deem it worthy of being a song. Your word choice, emotion, and story are excellent and also very helpful to call a piece a song. Wow, I can't get over how well written this is. Amazing job. I also gave this a 5/5
Wow, it's been a long time since I've read anything that you've wrote... A very long time in fact. I can definitely see the improvement and the change of writing style in some ways. Amazing piece of writing; very heartfelt.