Nuerological Thoughts

by Jack Nightengale   Oct 9, 2011


Barely breathing,
heart not beating,
thinking, dreaming,
Lay here bleeding

Life, dedicated,
Dead eradicated,
steadily pleading,
Enemy's feeding

Two caps, one pill,
time almost standing still,
wondering,sleeping,
silenced without weeping,

Sadness, sorrow
No time left to borrow,
Machines beeping,
Words that he's not speaking.

Dead but still dreaming,
A world that needs saving,
Nothing left to do but fall,
Let it all go, get rid of it all.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Whatever works

    Wow, nice flow Kris, and nice rhyme too
    I labsolutley loved this on although sad very nicely wrote :D i like it

  • 12 years ago

    by Carissa

    I love this poem, it has a unique pattern that I just absolutley love! (: 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by anonymous

    Wow!! thats deep 100/100

  • 12 years ago

    by Renegade Angel

    As always this poem is great, the reality speks to my soul and my ears are tickled by this. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Britt

    A quick tip... the title is spelled incorrectly. It's 'neurological'. :)

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