Well I've never thought that words could dance, but you made it dance with your vocabulary, it did got me hypnotize for a while and drown within your passion of wordplay. A beautiful write with a beautiful flow. Excellent Job Connie:)
6 years ago
by Chevalier des Fleurs
Wow, very well written, It is full of beautiful imagery and you executed each sentence with the utmost vivid and creative structure I have seen in a long while. Awesome work. Thank you for the comment on mine. 5/5
A very well structured and precisely executed array of thoughts. I would pick a fav stanza but I love the entire piece. The co-relation of words is astounding. Semantics of course is subjective. But in my opinion this piece is graceful yet ravishing. Penned.