Emotional Dancer

/Tightrope of torment
gentle ballet of despair
as you dip into romance
life's emotional snare.
//
I really loved this stanza... so cleverly written ... very interesting style of writing you have :)

/devotion the catalyst
for the emotional race.
// it's very true ... beautifully put across.

Well I've never thought that words could dance, but you made it dance with your vocabulary, it did got me hypnotize for a while and drown within your passion of wordplay. A beautiful write with a beautiful flow. Excellent Job Connie:)

Wow, very well written, It is full of beautiful imagery and you executed each sentence with the utmost vivid and creative structure I have seen in a long while. Awesome work. Thank you for the comment on mine. 5/5

A very well structured and precisely executed array of thoughts. I would pick a fav stanza but I love the entire piece. The co-relation of words is astounding. Semantics of course is subjective. But in my opinion this piece is graceful yet ravishing. Penned.

"Tightrope of torment
gentle ballet of despair
as you dip into romance
life's emotional snare."

my fav part ^_^

loved the whole thing!
the flow was amazing.. i read the first part and had to keep reading. very orignal and enticing

keep it up
5/5 from me