Emotional Dancer

by Cinnamonspice   Oct 9, 2011


Artistic moves,
dancers in the air
twirling and twisting
waltzing on a prayer.

Tightrope of torment
gentle ballet of despair
as you dip into romance
life's emotional snare.

Moonbeams the spotlight
as lovers embrace.
devotion the catalyst
for the emotional race.

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  • 6 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    /Tightrope of torment
    gentle ballet of despair
    as you dip into romance
    life's emotional snare.
    //
    I really loved this stanza... so cleverly written ... very interesting style of writing you have :)

    /devotion the catalyst
    for the emotional race.
    // it's very true ... beautifully put across.

  • 6 years ago

    by Faithless

    Well I've never thought that words could dance, but you made it dance with your vocabulary, it did got me hypnotize for a while and drown within your passion of wordplay. A beautiful write with a beautiful flow. Excellent Job Connie:)

  • 6 years ago

    by Chevalier des Fleurs

    Wow, very well written, It is full of beautiful imagery and you executed each sentence with the utmost vivid and creative structure I have seen in a long while. Awesome work. Thank you for the comment on mine. 5/5

  • 6 years ago

    by Exostosis

    A very well structured and precisely executed array of thoughts. I would pick a fav stanza but I love the entire piece. The co-relation of words is astounding. Semantics of course is subjective. But in my opinion this piece is graceful yet ravishing. Penned.

  • 6 years ago

    by Something Diabolical

    "Tightrope of torment
    gentle ballet of despair
    as you dip into romance
    life's emotional snare."

    my fav part ^_^

    loved the whole thing!
    the flow was amazing.. i read the first part and had to keep reading. very orignal and enticing

    keep it up
    5/5 from me