Kiss me Kill me

Killing and rebirth are things that happen often in the human lifespan whether we realize it or not.
Thank you truly for your thoughts ^_^

This is defientely a dark love poem. I like it :-) (I'm not a fan of love poems). Very powerful wording. You have little syllables on each line, but still can produce some powerful lines. My favourite were:
Pain by pleasure
And death by bliss
Heat and chill
Ice and smolder
Those lines definetely stood out.
Anyhoo I gotta stop reviewing your poems now; I have jsut stuffed up my computer screen (no idea how) but I will get back to reading more from you.
You're going on my favourites list.

lol thank you cutie ^_^ i'm glad you liked my poem. You're very good as well.

i like this one ....i would kiss u but not kill u thne who would write all these wonderful poems ? :)

i loved it, very deep words.... keep the good work up