Comments : Nectarous

  • 12 years ago

    by Sunshine

    You, bring out, some of the most hidden feelings inside of me, i love the combination, i love the imagination, the flow, the word choice, and i definitely loved the mango.

    impressive

  • 12 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Brilliant as always. Loved these lines:

    so my teeth tear into your words like fallen fruit
    fully ripened adjectives, palatable conviction, juicy imagery

    Great job!