Im gonna be the 1st to comment on urs too:) hhhhh I really love working with u:)thnx too

This poem is definately worth another read. I think we all know how it feels to fall for someone, but not having the courage to tell them. The emotions are really strong and powerful and I like your choice of words. Both of you did a good job!

Wow just amazing and wonderful,,,i love love loved it very outstanding with now good words to explain how much i loved it :) :) very,,,very,,,i can't come to a decision :0) i loved it 10/10 and you guys worked very well together :)

Good work you two great jib :)

Wow.. love this..:) great work.. both of you..:) 5/5

I simply loved it....:) awesome collab guys must say .....5/5 :)

I really liked the flow of this poem. But the overall theme was excellent. It said so much , each word gave thought to another..Awesome write

Connie