WOW! very powerful writing! 5/5 for sure!
i love everything about this poem and more! words can not express how good this is!

OH WOW.! Gurl You Got Some Talent!
And Im NOT Just Saying That.
Your Poetry Is So Dark, And I Honestly Probably Wouldnt Be reading it if it wasnt in disscussion! But IM GLAD I Did! I love the way you wright and your style of writing!
Its SO You!
5/5

Oh my.. the rhyming scheme is amazing.
It flows so well, and it gives depth to the poem along with the wording choice.

I really like the flow and rhyme scheme of this poem because it does not feel forced, but flows smoothly as it is. I also like the vivid image you set with your words. It was definately an enjoyable and heartfelt poem, that really captivated me.

Thank you ^.^

III LOVEIT...
IT WAS BEAST.

Lol thank you ^.^

Wow...That one made me think towards the end :) Most poems dont do that so good job! You're a great writer

I think this is really a beautiful poem...wonderful...!!
now on i will for sure read your poems...:]

Very well written. sweet and simple. i would suggest that "Or do I reflect you?"
be it's own line. for a better effect. I know you have this two line design. but it might create a better view. like a personal question. the last words you cling on to..as if you're letting them ring forever. a taunt? But it's just a suggestion.

A very good write, u capture the emotion in scenes so vividly. clear and concise with a good flow.

Great write, it was amazing and the emotion was so good, I believe that you done really good on this poem
5/5

I liked this one, reminds me of when I stare into the mirrior. Short yes, but ity said what it needed to.

Hello, Jessie!

Your rhymes made a lovely yet sad tone, and gave depth to the poem, well-done. ;)

'The reflection of you always daunting,
Never free from the taunting'

^

I just guess that these two lines were a little bit...just a little bit 'weird'? I don't know, they didn't flow much well. =/ Maybe that's just me! :)

Good poetry, nevertheless, sadness all over the piece. Keep writing, lovely.

This is well-penned. As I read it, I didn't even stop. Shows the flow was awesome (for me, anyway). The theme is dark and beautiful.

'A beautiful girl with gorgeous eyes
hidden in a world of her demise'
This part stood out for me. Rhymes flowed well and at the same time gives a great imagery.

5/5 :) Keep writing!

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