Wow will leave a comment soon papa is calling me for dinner...NOMINATED

As I told you before..I LOVE THIS. So original, so interesting and the images are really unique. I find myself getting lost in trying to find the meaning, but at the same time I just live in the images. Love, love, love.

Uuuhlalalalalala..I will never look at pancakes the same way...

What a sensual delightful write temps..

IF,I ever had to describe you in one word..
oh believe me..you are "REFRESSSHINGGGGGG"

your poetry feels,let me tell you like what..
you know when you are in a really really really hot place? and you're sweating...
and then suddenly..you get out of there..and a cold breeze hits you in the face and you go like...aaahhhhhhhhhhhh.....

welll thats exactly it,
you're poetry no matter how sad it may be at times...even with a whole bunch of complicated words...I'm not saying this piece is..but some of them are...they ARE NEVER EVER DULL..NEVER..

You have such an unique way of putting things...
you are one special young lady..oh m..m..m..

I really enjoyed this read :)
Its like the 5th time I read it already

NOMINATED...

CAN YOU HEAR THAT BOOM BOODOOM BOODOOM BASS ;)

Temps,

This was one sticky sweet poem and I adored it. The idea of someone being a pancake house was intriguing, never heard anyone described in such a way so well done for bringing a new and original idea to poetry. I wasn't so sure how you went from palms to spine, I understood what you were going for here but I wonder why you chose the spine instead of wrist or arm, or something closer. The idea of having hands covered in maple was an interesting metaphor but yes I was quite surprised when you mentioned spine because the imagery completely changed for me, the positions of the people, at first I imagined two people sitting together face to face then obviously he had her back to her.. I did love that element of surprise however, perhaps I'm looking too deep.

The connecting of maple and sappy was a great idea, reminded me of a tree of course but I liked how you took those two elements that seemed totally unrelated and related them.

This was lovely and it's great to read something new from you. Sorry it has taken me so long to comment!

Mel.

Oh i like the idea of pancake, very creative, a lovely poem :)

Short but very meaningful poem. The sanity of whole piece hide in fertile thoughts about Pancake. You are very creative, the symmetry of your poem is obviously original and cleverly written..it is very impressive:)

I really LOVE this, great work, an amazing way of expression, I can't wait to read more

Wow is so...refreshing- your descriptions are breath taking. it's so different and unique.