Comments : I Figured Out

  • 6 years ago

    by Exostosis

    Aww such a lovely poem.

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael Takhellambam

    Great. It's 4.999999.../5.
    I hope ur next poems will bear rhythms at the end of lines.

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael Takhellambam

    Great. It's 4.999999.../5.
    I hope ur next poems will bear rhythms at the end of lines.

  • 6 years ago

    by Truelove

    Thanks :D

  • 6 years ago

    by Boy

    Its a good poem. full of emotions try to pan it in stanzas dont write long lines... on other hand is good love poem... full of emotions and true feelings...

  • 6 years ago

    by Truelove

    Thank You <3

  • 6 years ago

    by My Name Is Mouse

    First of all, I liked the rhythm of this poem and the title, but I couldn't stay focused because of all the words with capitals - I was more so looking for at least one word with lower case letters. I like the finish of the poem, that you have hope you will last forever in love with one person. I wish you the best with that.

    Mouse.

  • 6 years ago

    by My Name Is Mouse

    First of all, I liked the rhythm of this poem and the title, but I couldn't stay focused because of all the words with capitals - I was more so looking for at least one word with lower case letters. I like the finish of the poem, that you have hope you will last forever in love with one person. I wish you the best with that.

    Mouse.

  • 6 years ago

    by My Name Is Mouse

    First of all, I liked the rhythm of this poem and the title, but I couldn't stay focused because of all the words with capitals - I was more so looking for at least one word with lower case letters. I like the finish of the poem, that you have hope you will last forever in love with one person. I wish you the best with that.

    Mouse.

  • 6 years ago

    by Sid Quinsaat

    So sweet

  • 6 years ago

    by Fading Memory

    Bueatiful :) very sweet i adore it n' i love it to , am falling into every single word , now you better save me hold me :P its really a good one , keep writing and i,ll keep on reading voting commenting and loving ;)

  • 6 years ago

    by Truelove

    Sid : thank you :)

    schizophrenic : i appreciate that =) i love writing love poems <3 i love being romantic :$
    thank you

  • 6 years ago

    by Truelove

    Sid : thank you :)

    schizophrenic : i appreciate that =) i love writing love poems <3 i love being romantic :$
    thank you

  • 6 years ago

    by Gone

    First; I totally live the title!!! And it kinda sounds like a song to me it's so beautifullll and I can really see the love <3

    my fav part was the last two lines:D

    Definately a 5/5. And what would make it even more awesome would be if u rhymed some words with each other. Again: great job!!

  • 5 years ago

    by Truelove

    Thanks <3 :)

    I'll next time ;)

  • 5 years ago

    by Lori

    Very sweet poem. I like it. 5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by Truelove

    :) thanks

  • 5 years ago

    by L

    I like it as well, but then again the capital letters all over the poem. It does make it unique, but it just stealing the attention of the reader. My advice, lose the capital letters and just use it whenever its appropriate.

    I like your love poems, they are sweet. :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Truelove

    Thanksss :)

  • 5 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    I think you penned a good poem but having capital letters like you have take from the poem/
    Even though punctuation and capitalizing isn't a strict must it is a tool in making your poem more readable.
    Keep up the good work