Aww such a lovely poem.

Great. It's 4.999999.../5.
I hope ur next poems will bear rhythms at the end of lines.

Great. It's 4.999999.../5.
I hope ur next poems will bear rhythms at the end of lines.

Thanks :D

Its a good poem. full of emotions try to pan it in stanzas dont write long lines... on other hand is good love poem... full of emotions and true feelings...

Thank You <3

First of all, I liked the rhythm of this poem and the title, but I couldn't stay focused because of all the words with capitals - I was more so looking for at least one word with lower case letters. I like the finish of the poem, that you have hope you will last forever in love with one person. I wish you the best with that.

Mouse.

First of all, I liked the rhythm of this poem and the title, but I couldn't stay focused because of all the words with capitals - I was more so looking for at least one word with lower case letters. I like the finish of the poem, that you have hope you will last forever in love with one person. I wish you the best with that.

Mouse.

First of all, I liked the rhythm of this poem and the title, but I couldn't stay focused because of all the words with capitals - I was more so looking for at least one word with lower case letters. I like the finish of the poem, that you have hope you will last forever in love with one person. I wish you the best with that.

Mouse.

So sweet

Bueatiful :) very sweet i adore it n' i love it to , am falling into every single word , now you better save me hold me :P its really a good one , keep writing and i,ll keep on reading voting commenting and loving ;)

Sid : thank you :)

schizophrenic : i appreciate that =) i love writing love poems <3 i love being romantic :$
thank you

Sid : thank you :)

schizophrenic : i appreciate that =) i love writing love poems <3 i love being romantic :$
thank you

First; I totally live the title!!! And it kinda sounds like a song to me it's so beautifullll and I can really see the love <3

my fav part was the last two lines:D

Definately a 5/5. And what would make it even more awesome would be if u rhymed some words with each other. Again: great job!!

Thanks <3 :)

I'll next time ;)

Very sweet poem. I like it. 5/5

:) thanks

I like it as well, but then again the capital letters all over the poem. It does make it unique, but it just stealing the attention of the reader. My advice, lose the capital letters and just use it whenever its appropriate.

I like your love poems, they are sweet. :)

Thanksss :)

I think you penned a good poem but having capital letters like you have take from the poem/
Even though punctuation and capitalizing isn't a strict must it is a tool in making your poem more readable.
Keep up the good work