Comments : It's time to dream of something new...

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    As I close my eyes and think of you
    My heart crumbles onto the floor
    I don't want to dream of you after all
    And I will not love you anymore...
    -This is filled with such raw pain.

    This poem honestly left me speechless. The love yall used to feel runs strong & how when she left you, she destroyed you. The pain is unbearably felt in this piece.

    An amazing Poem
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Cold floor, bare room
    Life is shredded, torn apart
    Eyes full of tears, pictures to burn
    Broken promises, shattered heart
    ~ this is my favorite stanza
    But all in all I loved it all :)
    A very fantastic, wonderful job I loved it though it was sad
    A 5/5 from me :)