by BlueJay
This piece is interesting. Emotion is carrying it, word choice is helping you there. the voice is strong and really gives a look to the reader of who you are. The flow is stunning, it makes this piece perfect in length. Other than this, I am not really sure what else to say, except that the title caught my eye, however this piece fell short of my expectations. |
by BlueJay
This piece is interesting. Emotion is carrying it, word choice is helping you there. the voice is strong and really gives a look to the reader of who you are. The flow is stunning, it makes this piece perfect in length. Other than this, I am not really sure what else to say, except that the title caught my eye, however this piece fell short of my expectations. |
by Lee
Lust and self loathing, intertwined, this is another excellent example of your ability. |
by Skyfire
I liked the way you intertwined both emotions. Its a connection you don't often see, but it makes this piece all the stronger. Personal and lovely. |