Comments : The last poem

  • 6 years ago

    by shayla

    This poem made me tear up but i like this poem very much
    i sometimes feel your pain

  • 6 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    I cryed, since long time I didnt. I know I dont know u, or even felt some of ur pain, but its not the end, there is nothin impossible:) stay strong.
    An amazing poem. Ofc a 5 from me. Best wishes from me

  • 6 years ago

    by Georgia

    This is truly beautiful. A well written poem 5/5

  • "It's a dieing sun And I'm acheing for a star."

    Those two sentences has spelling errors. So it should be "dying sun" and "I'm aching.."

    Just thought i'd help out a bit. Lovely poem and well-written even with the spelling errors.

    5/5

    -Heather

  • 6 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Kind of a sing song poem. Emotionless however the theme was a good one. It could have been dynamic, and powerful with a little more thought

  • 6 years ago

    by Rihanna

    This made me cry...

    Wow!!!! Xxx

  • 6 years ago

    by mira

    Awsom very nice sensetive and true feeling i love it and this part was great(The hate I feel
    The wounds don't heal
    That is all me
    That is all I can be
    I realize my end
    And the last words I send
    Is for her and her only) well done 5/5 bravo

  • 6 years ago

    by Jennah Bella

    This made a powerful read. There was something kind of musical about it. I could imagine someone rapping your words over a beat.

    Excellent

    5/5

  • 6 years ago

    by Faith Ann

    Wow tht was good :) 5/5

  • 6 years ago

    by Xanthe

    So sad, yet so beautiful. Great piece. Really enjoyed reading this :) Keep writing 5/5

    -X

  • 6 years ago

    by Angel

    Aw this is so sad it made me cry :'(

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Kurse

    SO sweet and sad loved it!

  • 6 years ago

    by josefina reyna

    Wonderful poem and so much description.

  • 6 years ago

    by Silent Girl

    I love the flow of this poem alot :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Silent Girl

    Very sad poem the last step i take very touching poem :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Alyssa Rianne

    I love this one of my favorites *5*

  • 6 years ago

    by hayet serenade

    It is very touching poem i really like it carry on

  • 6 years ago

    by never again

    Wow babe your good!!!

  • 5 years ago

    by Fear2love

    Woe this is incredible

  • 5 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Excellent write. Oh this is such a heartbreaking and touching piece. I love the whole poem but I really like how you expressed to your love that she should never close the doors to her heart just because she's has been or might be hurt by you. Excellent