This was a very heartfelt piece. I really felt the emotion in every stanza.

5/5

I really liked this piece Holly. I've strayed away from reading rhyming poetry, but this poem didnt' turn me away. I liked the story, and your wording! It wasnt the same old rhymes that you normally read...Lost love is hard, hard to get over, hard to deal with memories, I think you described it well :)