The sweetness of your words just amazes me.

Its hard to lose someone you have all of those feelings for, its even harder to forget them and move on, you just keep on wondering was it really over ?!

Superb Matt
5/5

I've always believed that you were the one
In my pocket, I hold a lucky clover
As I lay here with tears in my eyes,
I have to ask, are we really over?
-I can relate to this....

Amazing freaking amazing poem :).
The love is flawless, only wanting to be with her & propose. When asking yourself trying to hold is it really over as your heart breaks apart.

5/5:)

This is amazing. emotion is abundant and strong. The story is good too. The rhyme scheme feels forced, the flow is a nice recovery though. There isnt much origonality, but there is personality and a true voice. The tone is nice and it starts at the very beginning which is nice.

Wow sad and AMAZING,,, a splendid job i really loved it
it was lovely and great,,,you outdo your selft in every poem you do,,,very awesome
it all sounds desirable other than the sad parts but the poem was fantastic,,,I hope the best for you my friend 5/5