Comments : Back Bone

  • 12 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    Powerful, supportive, loving thoughts penned with an ardent desire to help. Every soul who develops an addiction needs a saviour. Bless your efforts, hope they work. A great write for the red ribbon week. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    And I forgot, it deserves a nomination for its moral fiber.

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    A deep and affectionate poem. The care you penned is intense and sincere
    I found it a poem to be read by anyone addicted to anything. I commend you for this effort to help someone and for the power and strength you enclosed in words that flowed with brilliance

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    AMAZING wonderful and great,,,u did fantastic and anyone is lucky to have u ur a great terrific person,,,willing to be by their side through all that's happened or goin to happen,,,amazing 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Wonderfully written, everyone can relate to this honestly I can understand this because I have someone very special to me addicted to drugs and It really changes their character. Great poem I could've express it any better than you did.

  • 12 years ago

    by Bobby

    Awesome poem on how addictions can be more powerful than the love of someone

    My favorite line is the bottom comment, "doesnt deserve me in his"

    Every decision has consequences and no one in a relationship should be second choice to anything

    great series of writing and great poem I enjoyed it greatly :0)

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Hey Holly,

    I really loved this poem. I started to get emotional reading each line.

    Let me be your backbone,
    keep you standing tall,
    put all your strength onto me,
    I'll never let you fall,
    alone you'll never conquer this
    addiction.
    ^^^^^

    I love this stanza. The words are so strong and at this point you can already feel exactly what the poem is about and the meaning behind it.

    I felt even more emotional reading the part where you mother had gone through this as well (So very sorry)

    I have to say that there are so many people out there going through things alone - this poem shows that there are people willing to stick by you no matter what.

    I loved it!

    x