Comments : Orange aura

  • 12 years ago

    by Lofallenve

    To be honest, I miss the stars dearly.
    I know exactly what you mean in this poem. :)
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    I loved it,,,wonderful :) :) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Jess

    Wow, Amazing Poem.
    5/5 !

  • 12 years ago

    by Imortalrain

    This reminds me when we went camping and near the ocean we could see every star imaginable, the sky was full of them. It was beautiful and awe inspiring. There wasn't much to say but our hearts heard it all. Then was the time to go back home and there were so few....it almost can kill you with how sad it is.

    Thank you for posting this. I enjoyed it as I'm sure others will.

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Using past and present forms to guides us.
    From the stars to a GPS. I liked it. The length was good, your choice of words as well and the rhyming I can't complain. 5/5