Comments : Cast Out

  • 5 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    I would say that the emotions behind this poem are immensely sad, touching and deep reaching in to the soul of the reader. Such moving words, certainly deserve a nomination, so others can read what happens when there is a breach of trust with a small child in the middle. The most moving read of the week for me. My heart goes out to your child, deprived of his father's love, and to you on the shortsightedness of your loved one. 5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I agree that the emotion is well expressed. The description and emotion went so well together, and really showed your true voice. I could feel what you felt at certain points. Fantastic piece

  • 5 years ago

    by Decayed

    I really like the style in here. Tempo--- flawless

  • 5 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    I agree with everyone and a splendid job a fantastic poem sad but I loves it 5/5