Comments : Dear Lover

  • 7 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is very well written, and I love the reps of A lonely, poignant lover it was effective in driving the theme home

  • 7 years ago

    by Lee

    This is a really nice poem,... ummm wait,, that sounded kinda lame.. what i mean IS... =D

    The use of morning, afternoon, evening and goodbye, is wonderfully placed, building a plot-line, essentially drawing the reader in. the repetition as mentioned above builds a sense of whole (its a complete piece not a shard of a poem like a lot I've seen on PnQ)

    And yet more important than these meaningless literary tools, is the feelings you embodied into the work... you make it quite clear you were feeling these emotions as you wrote it,
    And you have no problem relaying this to paper (or font) a poem of this caliber is pretty rare on this site, from the 20 to 30 I have actually read.

  • 7 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Brilliant..

    D whole idea..i hv nvr read smthin like dis b4.
    Ful points..

  • 7 years ago

    by aminath

    Beautiful poem with natural flow. Enjoyed it all the way. A 5 from me!

  • 7 years ago

    by Su

    Amazingg! keep it up! :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Famous Last Words

    I loved it, it seems so elegant and nostalgic, i could hear music while i read it making it beautifully sincere and emotional.

  • 7 years ago

    by Famous Last Words

    I loved it, it seems so elegant and nostalgic, i could hear music while i read it making it beautifully sincere and emotional.

  • Wow!
    i luv how u expressed this <3
    5/5

  • 7 years ago

    by Diva

    5/5 speechless

  • 7 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Like the idea in this

  • 7 years ago

    by ChrisT

    Omg you are amazing... your poetry just captivates me i cant stop reading and i need to get back to work lol

  • 7 years ago

    by Lioness

    Wow!

    What can I say? I am so captivated by this poem.

    The whole poem was so strong but I found most of the strength in the first and last stanza. You opened the poem amazingly and closed the poem just the same!

    This is one of my fav's!

    x 5/5

  • 7 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Thanks for the words

  • 7 years ago

    by Salina Is Beautiful Galm

    Amazing 5/5