Lifeless

by jAsZmIn   Oct 30, 2011


When your gone
You left a hole in my heart
Everything seem so wrong
Every path I walked on was black

Theres no turning back and not moving on
I'm stuck in this lifeless place
I gave my heart to you but you gave yours to her
You've put my heart into hell

I gave you everything but you turn and embrace her tight
Your love is killing me
Now that you took away my heart
I feel empty inside

You took my life force and breath away
And live me behind in this lifeless corpse
I'm still drowned by my own tears
I feel suffocated that I can't even breath

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  • 12 years ago

    by Fading Memory

    :D hehhe well done when it comes its no fun 10\10

  • 12 years ago

    by jAsZmIn

    Thnx for the compliment.. :)
    Although I never had this sort of relationship,, or anything related to love.. but I don't know,, maybe I'm just preparing myself for some probability of heartbreaks and stuffs and also inspired by reading mangas (such a kid) hehe,, anyways thnx..

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    I can relate to this<3

    Loving somebody so much & giving them your all, and them backstabbing you going to some other girl. The love you felt for him shines through, the pain you feel is overwhelming.

    Amazing Job
    5/5

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