I dont believe

by Kota the Unheard   Oct 31, 2011


I don't believe in love,
I don't believe its real,
Broken down to tiny pieces,
Is how you make me feel.
I try to get away,
From all of your lies,
You're taunting me like always,
Surprise Surprise.
I try to get away again,
But you bring me more pain.
Whenever this happens,
The clouds come out and it starts to rain.
If I get away, What will I do?

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  • 10 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    Another great poem, from a great poet.

  • 10 years ago

    by Something Diabolical

    This is really good. Short but not at all sweet.

    Some powerful emotion here, I like the use of words and rhyme scheme. It flows really well too.

    The question at the end kept me thinking..

    Keep it up!

  • 10 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    This is a really good poem. I feel alot of emotion when i read it. You done a really good job!

  • 11 years ago

    by Silent Girl

    Great poem :) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Wow everything is great and amazing in this fantastic poem that's greatly written,,like wow I loved it great job and perhaps many can relate but what u've written definitely hit my heart because I know and felt what u've said,,things will come together someday don't ask me how can't answer just know someday it will,,perhaps hope is best,,but I definitely feel and understand what u've said/written 10/10

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