Comments : This Old Dirt Road

  • 6 years ago

    by aanika R I P

    Though the whole poem is great but i personally liked this stanza a lot.....:) great work

    "I wish I could go back and change my past,
    re-write the unwritten of "I love you's" that last.
    Now my parents are gone and my brothers have left,
    all that's left is this old house and to many regrets. "

    5/5 :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Ruby Red Memories

    I really liked reading this poem you really breathed life into this piece and I could feel the pain of the character in the poem.

    5/5

  • 6 years ago

    by Imortalrain

    I like this one, it is good because it doesn't just fit you...there are so many that it could relate to that it's almost saddening. Thank you for posting this. I enjoyed reading it.

  • 6 years ago

    by DirtRoadGirl

    I love this alot, shows alot of emotion. Everybody has comething in their past they wish they could change 5/5<3

  • 6 years ago

    by L

    Its good, I can feel the emotion.

  • 6 years ago

    by Exostosis

    I will have to agree with everyone. It is emotional. Most can relate to such circumstances.

    I wish I could go back and change my past,
    re-write the unwritten of "I love you's" that last.
    Now my parents are gone and my brothers have left,
    all that's left is this old house and to many regrets.

    The last stanza pretty much sums it up. The flow is appropriate. Simple yet makes one ponder upon.

  • 5 years ago

    by Brittany Ottmo

    "I wish I could go back and change my past,
    re-write the unwritten of "I love you's" that last.
    Now my parents are gone and my brothers have left,
    all that's left is this old house and to many regrets"

    I love that part! and the poems was great. it kinda makes me look back at my life, it is on the same lines as this poem is.. good job

    5/5 ^_^

  • 3 years ago

    by Brittany Ottmo

    Wow, I felt every piece of that poem! that hit me straight in the heart! When i look back on my dirt road I see so many things i don't wanna ever see again. But, those old dirt roads are what built us, and are what made us! made us into the person we choose to be today! Amazing job! ^_^

    *~BrittBratt~*