More complicated words to present the message but the story is the same as has been written before by many others. The man's dreams and desires of what his "woman, his love" will be, his hunt for her, how their meeting will be, the emotions he feels, dreams of what she will look like and how they will act when he finds his love.

Even though the story, message is not original in that is has been told many times, many ways, the poem is extremely well written and readable. I will have to give credit for this version of the love story because it does show imagination in the presentation. The technical merits are top notch.

Oh yes, the story will always revolve around the same plot, just the presentation form changes, from author to author.

It is the way you write and your usage of words gives this whole poem a mythical image for the mind to see..liked the read :) Very well penned!

Dude I am in awe of this write. You did not only an word usage but images are clear and vivid. Emotional value is creative and abundant

I kind of agree with Sylvia, but at any levell.. This is amazingly written with musicality.. Yes, I can hear the notes being compose with every other word read.

And the style you knitted those stanzas with is very provocative, flowing and flaws-free.

Amazing one [y]

I seem to be so far behind again in comments.
What you did with this poem was nothing but sheer genius . I loved the flow and every word penned

Connie

I knew that people would think this poem great! Especially your vocab, and the idea is what many have portrayed, but you have YOUR own way of writing it. :)

Beautiful <3

A poem of deep desire bursting with intensity and richly worded in the style of the romantic poetry of centuries ago. Very well done!

This is an amazing piece..nice choice of words and the flow is amazing...5/5

Wow this piece is amazing. You have presented a wonderful purpose to write and you seized the opportunity to create such a wonderful piece. The emotion here is fantastic and it really does show up in every aspect of the piece. The word choice was fantastic because it helped create an element of this piece's story. The flow really is easy to follow and well constructed. All in all this piece is excellent 5/5 for sure

Her voice, perhaps it is her voice
that lures me silent and tamed
Her skin albicant, lapped in milk and honey
The radiant of all, those dwell in bodies

and her halo topaz, sets this heart throbbing
Must she devise separation between hands intertwined

For I have sailed across the oceans of time
to find my river queen
to dock within her harbor lovat
Must she, my ardent star
beacon my homecoming

^^those are probably my most favorite though it was a lil hard for I loved the wording and the deepness of this wonderful poem I loved it and enjoyed reading it it had divine beauty through the lines and wow I loved a fantastic job 5/5

This is so cute i love it a 5 from me
-Angel

Wow... That was so... Incredible...
Your descriptions gave me chills and pulled me in.
Incredible job.
Adding you to my favorites.
5/5
-Heather

Denitley a well thought up poem....you can really tell when someone pours their heart into a poem and this was one of them.....I liked it a lot t.....the sensual lovey dovey warm feeling.... it's a cute poem......and an amazing one too

keep up the good work :)

This is so pretty.....great poem:)

This is a neat poem loved it