Comments : Forget Him Once Again

  • 5 years ago

    by Chevalier des Fleurs

    What a explicit poem in the way it is very strong in it's message of breaking away from someone and trying to do what is best for you. A great poem with an amazing flow from start to finish, a strong message and a capturing read. Great job. 5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by LOvEiSNotFoREvER

    One of my favorites so far..loved how you captured every little detail..very powerful and emotional..I think I cried a lil..perfect:)
    1000/10000

  • 5 years ago

    by Carrie

    I 2nd both comments above. I love your eye for such a heart felt moment! <3 ~ Carrie

  • 5 years ago

    by TheDarkCloudBehindthePoet

    I no this didn't happen because you don't even leave the house lol...a picture may say a thousand words but the way you portrayed this was amazing..a complete visual of what was happening...totally great.

  • 5 years ago

    by Heather Marie

    I love your poem but ive lived it had a guy heart me time in and out yet kept taking him back

  • 5 years ago

    by Heather Marie

    Sorry meant hurt me time in and out

  • 5 years ago

    by Girl of Conviction

    Tears fall from my eyes,
    seeing the sincerity on his face,
    I shake my head saying "No, I can't,
    I'm so sorry but you hurt me so bad,"
    his voice quivering as he says
    "please baby girl, I need you in my life,"
    Trying to remain strong I look up at him
    going you should have thought that
    before you broke my heart into pieces.

    ^^my favorite part of the poem :]

    its so sad yet beautiful :]

    such a great write full of emotion<3

    5/5