What a explicit poem in the way it is very strong in it's message of breaking away from someone and trying to do what is best for you. A great poem with an amazing flow from start to finish, a strong message and a capturing read. Great job. 5/5
I no this didn't happen because you don't even leave the house lol...a picture may say a thousand words but the way you portrayed this was amazing..a complete visual of what was happening...totally great.
Tears fall from my eyes,
seeing the sincerity on his face,
I shake my head saying "No, I can't,
I'm so sorry but you hurt me so bad,"
his voice quivering as he says
"please baby girl, I need you in my life,"
Trying to remain strong I look up at him
going you should have thought that
before you broke my heart into pieces.