What a explicit poem in the way it is very strong in it's message of breaking away from someone and trying to do what is best for you. A great poem with an amazing flow from start to finish, a strong message and a capturing read. Great job. 5/5

One of my favorites so far..loved how you captured every little detail..very powerful and emotional..I think I cried a lil..perfect:)
1000/10000

I 2nd both comments above. I love your eye for such a heart felt moment! <3 ~ Carrie

I no this didn't happen because you don't even leave the house lol...a picture may say a thousand words but the way you portrayed this was amazing..a complete visual of what was happening...totally great.

I love your poem but ive lived it had a guy heart me time in and out yet kept taking him back

Sorry meant hurt me time in and out

Tears fall from my eyes,
seeing the sincerity on his face,
I shake my head saying "No, I can't,
I'm so sorry but you hurt me so bad,"
his voice quivering as he says
"please baby girl, I need you in my life,"
Trying to remain strong I look up at him
going you should have thought that
before you broke my heart into pieces.

^^my favorite part of the poem :]

its so sad yet beautiful :]

such a great write full of emotion<3

5/5