Comments : Broken but I love you...

  • 12 years ago

    by aanika R I P

    Aww... could feel how broken the guy is...really touching and sad :( .... but so well written 5/5 :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Wow amazing beautiful lovely and wow but some sadness involved a fantastic write once again my great friend,,,tough trials is all we get but only cuz we can handle them and they make us better,,,what I just said may or maynot involve ur great poem but it will be greatly known to all that read,,,you are a magnificient poet my great friend,,,I will be their if a friend is needed during ur trials if any
    Now I'm rambling but loved the poem 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Boy

    Sometimes we lost every single thing that relates to our love. but we still hope to be with them. and to find and stay with them forever..

    this poem is full of true emotions relates to me exactly... i lost someone in past and still hope to find them..

    my fav stanza is

    Holding these tears in my hand,
    I want you to know, I'm still your man.
    You still hold that special key,
    always and forever, you and me.

    this is such a nice poem....a good form of dark poetry.. welldone