Two Little Objects

This is a very great poem hun. I love how you make it so relatable. We all love to write and the details are great. I like how you make it vague at first. You don't know what the two objects are at first making the reader's mind run wild. Then in the middle you spring on us the way you write. You want to write your feelings out and you did. I love how you say that writing really completes you. It really does though. Because you get all your feelings out and as poet's that is all we need. You have written a great poem here. 5/5

Your rhyme and flow was easy and smooth. Nothing forced or exaggerated. It has a clear message for all of us that know this romance with pen and paper, it's like no other, it doesn't cheat, or fade away, it's forever in our spirit and heart.
Excellent

I can relate to this..great poem.the emotions in it are real and the flow of words and rhyming are really good...5/5