My dear lu,
you sometimes take ages
to post poems again,
but then you do,and its alll....
you have a heart so big..and I don't believe you have a clue of how amazing you are.
I love nostalgic poetry,
this has so much melancholy and sadness
in it,yet it was clever..and mesmerizing...
I know you are always saying how much your friends mean to you,and this poem truly reflects that,
it also reflects all the ache that comes along with time as life..passes by...
I'm in awe by this write...
I was really fond to the "friendships mend by noon" phrase...
this is so heartfelt,and I'm out of words really
I just keep reading over and over again...
I love it I love it I love love love it!
5 years ago
I think that's very emotional. I really like the description: 'time becomes a tale...'
For once in my life I am speechless. This is possibly the best poem I have ever read. It's captivating, emotional and brilliantly put together. I can't say enough about how much I enjoyed it so I will leave it as said. Masterpiece
Lu, this was so beautiful. I am blown away and truly touched by this. It was so powerful and so true...life does pass us by.
5 years ago
This makes me miss my childhood, Lu. So emotional and captivating as always is your poetry. One thing I absolutely love is it talks of moonlight - wouldn't be a poem by you if it didn't include the moonlight :)