Connie & Tony: Truly, a very romantic poem capturing the beauty of such a night, a dream for each lover to build castles on one day, to enact the promises and pledges to fruition, one day. A truly touching and joyous poem to melt all those longing hearts in love.
The punch lines after each stanza are beautiful....each holding a promise of a new tomorrow, for lovers to fulfiill...
'I love you'
'Will you marry me?'
"I've waited so long"
"I love you"
My only comments (from this readers point of view only).......
The first punch line could be
"Ours forever" (implying the intended plurality in a proposal)
Similarly, the last punch line should be "Forever ours" (a word play to reflect the pledge in the ring).
And perhaps a minor word play
"The candle flames seems to spark"
instead of "The candles flame seems to spark"
A very heartwarming verse to warm the hearts and minds of true lovers. A truly exotic write. 5/5