Master piece
it takes alot of skill in order to be able to write such a poem.
thanks for the good read
nominated.

Sarah, great piece. As if saying... do this and that to me, but eventually... what?

Great hold on the tempo and the rhyming scheme was amazing. You showed lots of growing-weary emotions and I like it that way.

Great, great:)

Wow, such a deep poem about internal feelings! This made me really think about myself and "what makes me"! Such a deep, amazing poem my friend! Good work and THANK you for writing it!!