Dream turns into Nightmare

by ilovered   Nov 21, 2011


I had a dream last night.
I was delighted because it was you
We were together inside the car
You drove the car so fast
then suddenly we stop and you left me alone,
I felt upset at what you did.
No words uttered and you walked away from me
My dream turns into a nightmare,
Then a strange man came in.
He tried to get me and take me somewhere
But I frightened and he vanished right away..
I feel so scared at that moment and pray that u will come back to save me
But even shadow there was none
so I learned to drive the car alone Just to save myself from that stranger
I asked myself "why'd you leave me without any single words to say?"
I'm all alone, and you are not with me when I needed you most.
So I end up crying until I woke up from that nightmare.
Maybe my dream say's "I need to drive my own life and set you free."

Thank you for reading my poem..if you have any suggestion or comment please let me know to help me to improve my writings:)

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  • 12 years ago

    by E Dacaf

    The 6th line
    "I felt upset on what you did."
    should be at* what you did.

    9th line should be strange man not stranger.

    11th you forgot I WAS* frightened

    12th change praying to pray

    15th make it why would or why'd

    Now lol I like this it is a very good story or lesson. I asked my self was this really a dream? Keep it up maybe use the spell check more often to help with the errors I found. But again I like the story. I found the style kinda cute.

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