Comments : Lili

  • 5 years ago

    by sibyllene

    Hilarious. Still tickles me every time. For some reason I thought this was a cheeky abby or Jane write, but clearly you can be just as cheeky.

    Lili and her super bum. Bahahahaha.

  • 5 years ago

    by Decayed

    This was yours? :)
    God, I love it, especially the play on words in the end.

    So smooth and vivid. Excellent.

  • 5 years ago

    by Hellon

    I remember reading this one when it was posted in Nevi's contest and wondering if you wrote it..I knew it had to be a TC poem but I just thought of you for some reason. I have heard of a tiger lily but never a lion one...not sure if there even is a lion lily but that doesn'ter matter. My thoughts went straight to Michael Hutchence/Paula Yates little girl who had Tiger Lily somewhere in her name..sure you didn't mean her but...it's strange how the mind works when reading words by someone else.

    I thought your ending was absolutely brilliant...very witty word play.

  • 5 years ago

    by retha

    Lily white i be no more the torrent of shadows grimson waves blackened dusky praise, lily white i be ,lily white i love. Being lily fits me like a glove.