Comments : A locked gate.

  • 5 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    An uplifting write of faith and the rhymes were spot on. Liked it from start to end :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    This was really nice, Paul:)

    God indeed loves us, He loves us unconditionally.

    If you find time, you should read this:
    "Secrets of the light"by Dannion Brinkley. It is about a guy who had a NDE three times. He saw heaven on all of those occasions and he is able to share it with us all. He found out there is no such things as a hell, something I have known all along too..and we are all made of the same stuff: loving energy.

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 5 years ago

    by Erickson

    So very true, "for tomorrow might be too late,
    don't wait until you reach heaven, only to find a locked gate", God's grace is there for us, so we should take it now before it's late...

  • 5 years ago

    by Erickson

    So very true, "for tomorrow might be too late,
    don't wait until you reach heaven, only to find a locked gate", God's grace is there for us, so we should take it now before it's late...

  • 5 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Very true.
    This is a wonderful religious piece. Your faith shines through this... it's very uplifting. Your rhymes were fantastic, great job!

  • 5 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    God loves us no matter what. He has
    forgiven us for all of our sins. Sometimes
    we need to learn to forgive ourselves

  • 3 years ago

    by Lune de ma vie

    For tomorrow might be too late. That sure sits with me big time. Those words surely ring true to everyone when we actually see how fast life can be taken away from us. You did another fantastic job here showing us the love God holds for each one of us. Beautiful work my friend. Thanks for sharing.