Comments : Yearnings

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    OMG! omg AmaZING :D their is so much to beseen heard and said about this magnificient poem
    Bobby u connect so well and greatly with whatever u choose to write as I always love them and more and more each time :) I loved it and loved it all and always I enjoy reading ur excellent works :)
    My most favorite part--

    Will I exploded and then cease
    Or will I survive with flair
    Do I keep on trying
    Throughout the despair?

    I also liked this ones well--

    The yearnings are unfulfilled
    The goodbyes and let downs
    Especially when I can't see
    what are the honest, justifiable grounds.

    But wow I loved it all amazing job :) 20/20

  • 12 years ago

    by Lori

    I really like it. Very beautiful and meaningful!!