Comments : Flamingo Dawn

  • 12 years ago

    by Sylvia

    I love sunsets and I can see this one as I read your words. Good job.

  • 12 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    This was absolutely beautiful and captivating. Nicely done Randy

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    Lovely poem Randy!It is a masterpiece.

  • 12 years ago

    by Exostosis

    You my friend. have described sun rise with absolute brilliance and depth.

    A rising sun of caramel gold

    ^ this line is where I stopped and took a breath, thinking to myself, as to why cant I come up with such scarce creativity.

    This super nova of tropical fire

    ^ I just love how you've used "super nova", which is the most massive explosion in the cosmos, creating abundant light, whipping off every life within 1000 light years.

    The poetry in itself is so resplendent, I am short of words. Its like having a front row seat for viewing the sun rise from the paradise divine. I am highly impressed.

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Randy you have such a way with words, vivid images as if one was there looking at what you penned. Excellent bro

  • 12 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    It is like viewing a beautiful painted picture of nature with all her morning glory. I really enjoyed this :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    What a beautiful piece... you always awe me with your vivid descriptions ... the images you paint are mersmerizing ... I don't know how you manage to find perfect descriptions ... an amazing write... Loved it :D